**COMMENTS FOR PAPER NO.393**

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<th><strong>NO.</strong></th>
<th><strong>SECTION</strong></th>
<th><strong>COMMENTS</strong></th>
<th><strong>ACTIONS TO TAKE</strong></th>
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<td>1</td>
<td>Title</td>
<td>Objective of study is to rank <strong>factors</strong> for choosing online shopping platforms, not rank online shopping platforms, thus, “selection of online shopping platform” is not appropriate.</td>
<td>Change.</td>
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<td>2</td>
<td>Abstract</td>
<td>Objective of study “to determine factors” is not relevant since the factors have already been determined from past surveys/studies.</td>
<td>Omit.</td>
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<td>3</td>
<td>Abstract</td>
<td><strong>Significance of study: “assist users to determine a suitable online shopping platform for them to use” is not relevant to the findings of research.</strong></td>
<td>Omit.</td>
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<td>4</td>
<td>Introduction</td>
<td><p>Long sentence with no direction.</p>
<p>“As the technological landscape and the types of services enabled by connectivity continue to evolve, activities that previously required, or were mostly undertaken through, in-person (face-to-face) physically, interactions are increasingly being accomplished online through virtual interactions of various approaches as stated by Dias et al. (2020).”</p></td>
<td>Revise.</td>
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<td>5</td>
<td>Introduction</td>
<td>Problem (many online shopping platform available – consumers have difficulty to choose which online shopping platform) does not comply with the need for the research (rank factors for choosing online shopping platforms). Ranking factors for choosing online shopping platforms will not solve the difficulty to choose online shopping platforms.</td>
<td>Major correction is needed. Adjust the problem. Think of what is the problem that leads to the need of <strong>ranking factors</strong> for choosing online shopping platforms.</td>
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<td>6</td>
<td>Methodology</td>
<td>What does RI stand for? Random index or ratio index?</td>
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<td>7</td>
<td>Result and discussion</td>
<td>Results are not explained and discussed. The achievement of objective is not addressed.</td>
<td>Major correction is needed. Explain and discuss the results. Address the achievement of objective and the solution to the problem (from point no.5).</td>
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<td>8</td>
<td>Conclusion</td>
<td>Too simple.</td>
<td>Revise the problem and objective. Summarize the results. Provide ultimate conclusion.</td>
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